Golfing the Old Chisholm Trail

 

Title:                         Golfing the Old Chisholm Trail

Copyright                  2001

Author:                      emmastark

Rated:                        ~R~

Disclaimer:                 All original TAT characters belong to Stephen J. Cannell and Universal

Archive:                     Yes

Warning:                    War memories, language

Comments:                 Please

Summary:                   Response to the A-Slash Missing Scene Challenge -- Recipe for Bread

 

 

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Golfing the Old Chisholm Trail

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                 Come along boys and listen to my tale,

                 I'll tell you of my troubles on the old Chisholm trail.

                 Come a ti yi yippee, come a ti yi yea,

                 Come a ti yi yippee, come a ti yi yea,

 

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                 ...and then they pull out the club... a club, BA,

                 and they stand over you.  You close you’ little

                 eyes while they’re windin’ up, BA, and then

                 they swing that club with all their might...

 

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BA floored it (just because he felt like it) and the van shot away from the high-rise apartment building. 

 

Face climbed over Murdock and into his seat.  “Well, I hope you’re all happy,” he said.  “I’m homeless now.”

 

Hannibal took the cigar that Face handed him.  “We’re all homeless, Face.  That’s part of the fun of being fugitives.”

 

“But I can forget about it for a few brief, blissful moments when I’m lying between silk sheets.”

 

Murdock took a golf ball out of his pocket and began to draw a face on it.  “You could come stay with me, Facey,” he said.

 

Hannibal turned and gave Murdock an assessing gaze. 

 

Murdock glanced up at Hannibal, then sat the wide-eyed golf ball on the “legs” of his fingers. 

 

“You could come too, Colonel!” the golf ball said in a hoarse falsetto, kicking excitedly.  “Sleepovers are fun!”

 

BA made an abrupt left turn off of Wilshire, away from the VA, and Hannibal turned back around. 

 

“MPs,” BA said.

 

“Damn.”  Hannibal rolled down his window, letting in the murky LA air.  “I guess none of us are sleeping over at your place tonight, Captain.”

 

Murdock frowned.  “Aw, Hannibal… Tuesday’s spaghetti night.”  Murdock set the golf ball on Face’s shoulder. 

 

“Home, home on the range,” it sang, like a record played fast.  “Where the soldiers and NVA play…”

 

Face turned to look at Murdock, shoving the golf ball off his shoulder.  “Deer and antelope.” 

 

“Try your place, BA,” Hannibal said. 

 

BA nodded, and headed back toward Inglewood.

 

“Me an’ Faceman are turtles who have lost their shells,” Murdock said to his golf ball.  “Naked and alone, out in the cold, cruel world.  You know what I mean.  It’s the same for your people…”

 

BA glared into the rearview mirror.  “I gonna throw yo’ people out the window, foo’, you keep talkin’ to ‘em.”  He looked at Face, but Face was staring steadfastly out the window, looking for MPs.

 

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BA’s room was staked out too.  It wouldn’t be for long (the MPs didn’t seem to feel comfortable on 18th Street), but for the time being, it wasn’t safe for him to go back.

 

They ended up staying at Hannibal’s.  All of them.

 

Murdock suggested they start a campfire in the front room, sing songs all night and roast marshmallows, but Hannibal vetoed that idea, and they ended up having canned chili and saltine crackers and rolling their sleeping bags out by the heat register instead.

 

Hannibal disappeared into his bedroom after dinner.  BA and Face fell asleep to the sound of Murdock humming the theme song from Bonanza softly to himself.

 

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When Face woke up, sometime in the middle of the night, Murdock was curled against his side.  There was a ring of golf balls around them, a fairy circle with faces drawn on.  BA had a circle around him, too.

 

Face sighed. 

 

Murdock’s thinly veiled references to what had happened to the “golf balls” had gotten more and more detailed as the day wore on.  Riffing on metaphor and memory, variations on themes of torture and the need to escape.  The plight of the golf balls mirroring their own experiences a decade before.

 

Face didn’t want to remember. 

 

He had been happily not remembering all day.

 

Easy enough to be distracted by the destruction that always seemed to follow in their wake.  (Hopefully the real Mr. Tony would appreciate what had happened to the penthouse suite as an opportunity to redecorate, as opposed to a full-out disaster.)

 

It had been distracting seeing Lin, too.  And nice.  Nice seeing him and catching up a little, but…

 

He didn’t want to remember.

 

He had come to equate memory with pain, and decided to live without either years before.  Living today, today, today, now, now, now.

 

He’d never looked back.  Never, except…

 

Murdock cuddled closer into Face’s neck, breathing warmly.  “Come along boys and listen to my tale…” he mumbled, half-singing.  “I’ll tell you of my troubles on the ol’ Chisholm Trail.  Come a ti yi yippee, come a ti yi yea…”

 

Face squeezed his eyes shut.  He could feel Murdock’s breath on his ear.

 

Except when Murdock needed him to.

 

Face could feel Murdock’s eyes on him. 

 

“’Member me over to the other side, Facey,” Murdock said.  “I been stuck in the bad places all day.”

 

Face breathed out.  Opened his eyes and stared up at the ceiling.  Then pulled Murdock’s head onto his shoulder.

 

Richter had told Murdock that words were like boats that could carry you through the dark waters of your memories, and Murdock had clutched onto that thought.  He’d been putting himself back together for years.  And he was determined, now, to rescue the rest of them on that same boat.  Haul them, memory by memory, through the darkness and back into the light. 

 

How could you turn down somebody who was trying to save you?

 

“Remember the bread,” Face said.  “Remember?”

 

“Tell me it, Face,” Murdock said.

 

Face didn’t hear BA slide his sleeping bag closer.  He didn’t see Hannibal step outside his bedroom door at the sound of their soft voices. 

 

Face’s eyes traced the lines in the ceiling like a map in the dark.  He rubbed his eyes, and saw Vietnam.

 

“They made BA work both shifts, because he was the strongest of anybody in the camp, and they couldn’t stand that we were strong,” Face said wearily.  “Do you remember?”

 

Murdock nodded against Face’s shoulder.

 

“They were making us break ground, but we never knew for what, and it turned out to be for nothing.  Just to break us.”

 

“Just to try,” Hannibal said softly, into the darkness.

 

“Just to try,” Face said.  “But it went wrong, because at the shift change, they left BA in the field and Lin could get to him.”

 

“With the bread,” Murdock said. 

 

“We were starving,” Face said.  “Hurt and sick and starving.  Me and Hannibal had dysentery, then, and they kept trying to make you say you were CIA.”

 

“The Bell telephone hour,” Murdock murmured.  “Ring, ring.”

 

Face could see Murdock as he had been behind his eyelids.  Murdock’s arms had been so thin you could close your thumb and fingers around them.  He’d trembled from the electricity they put through him (wires hooked up to the radio), but he’d given the VC soldiers hell anyhow.  Talking at them when he couldn’t move and staring them down when he couldn’t talk.

 

Murdock patted Face’s chest gently.  “Then what happened?” he said.

 

“There was no place to hide the bread,” Face said.  “All we had to wear were rags.  And they killed you if they found you hording food.  But BA hid pieces of bread in his mouth anyhow, then fed the rest of us like birds at night.  Little pieces of bread that tasted bitter, like ginseng.”

 

He remembered BA propping Hannibal up against his chest.  Hannibal had been delirious with fever.  BA had taken bits of bread out from his cheeks and stuffed them between Hannibal’s lips with his fingers. 

 

When Face couldn’t lift his head from the ground (dysentery and exhaustion forcing his body down to the red dirt), BA had fed him, too.

 

“They kept us alive,” Face said.  “BA and Lin.”

 

“We kep’ each otha’ alive, little brutha,” BA said softly. 

 

Face felt his throat closing.  He patted Murdock roughly on the shoulder, then untangled himself from him.  He turned on his side, toward the wall.

 

Hannibal nodded at BA, and BA reached over and grabbed a handful of Murdock’s t-shirt.

 

“C’mon, foo’,” he said.  “You gotta sleep now.”

 

Murdock shook his head and threw an arm possessively over Face’s back. 

 

BA frowned, but let Murdock go. 

 

“We stayed strong an’ we escaped,” Murdock said loudly.  “We stayed strong.  That’s how the story goes.”

 

“That’s how the story goes,” Face murmured.  He was diving down into sleep.  Trying to get beneath the memories and dreams, into the dark, low, quiet place.

 

“Happily ever after, the end, Face,” Murdock said.  “Right, Face?”

 

“Come a ti yi yea…” Face said.  His voice slurred a little.  “Let papa bear tell the bedtime story t’morrow night, ‘kay Murdock?”

 

Murdock nodded. 

 

“Go sleep now, ‘kay, Murdock?” Face said.  “Can we go to sleep now?”

 

“Yeah,” Murdock said.  “We’re home on the range, now.”  He pulled his sleeping bag up over his shoulder and buried his head in his pillow.  Pulled Face closer.  “’Night, Face,” he murmured. “G’night, Hannibal and BA.” 

 

Hannibal said goodnight and BA growled.

 

Everything was quiet.

 

“Say goodnight, Gracie,” Murdock said softly.

 

A small, tinny round voice, somewhere in the darkness, said, “Goodnight, Gracie.”

 

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The three men on the floor fell asleep quickly.  It had been a long day.  And remembering takes a lot out of you.

 

Hannibal sat in the kitchen in the dark, drinking coffee and keeping watch over the others.  And remembering the taste of bread.

 

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~fin~

 

 

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